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Vendetta

Submitted by Ardano on August 15, 2001
Setting : Star*Drive Progress Level: 7
Rating: 95/100 - 3 comments - 524 Downloads

The second short story featuring the crew of the CSV Osprey. This time, they're up against something more deadly than the Klicks...

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User comments [3]

Vendetta

, rating: - August 31, 2001

I really like these short stories.. Your writing is good, and I encourage you to try writing bigger stuff. I'm sure it's a lot of fun!

Vendetta

, rating: 94 September 10, 2001

Very nice story as well!!I appreciated very much your way of dealing with the whole issue,no superheroes, combat as it is:swift,deadly and mercyless.
The dialogues are very clever and nice as always! I liked slightly more "Bughunt" because it was a bit less "rushed-on": here many things happen at a very fast pace (good thing on a side).Maybe a slightly slower pace would give u the possibility to develop even more your very good ideas!
Anyway, we definitively want more about Lt.Commander McWhirter - and I'm sure that you'll do really good on bigger stuff as well!

Vendetta

, rating: 96 January 14, 2002

Good job, you should definitly write more, It kept me in sespense scince I had to wait another 5 hours before I could finish it

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