The second short story featuring the crew of the CSV Osprey. This time, they're up against something more deadly than the Klicks...view/download 47 Kb doc
vempire, rating: - August 31, 2001
I really like these short stories.. Your writing is good, and I encourage you to try writing bigger stuff. I'm sure it's a lot of fun!
alitar, rating: 94 September 10, 2001
Very nice story as well!!I appreciated very much your way of dealing with the whole issue,no superheroes, combat as it is:swift,deadly and mercyless.
The dialogues are very clever and nice as always! I liked slightly more "Bughunt" because it was a bit less "rushed-on": here many things happen at a very fast pace (good thing on a side).Maybe a slightly slower pace would give u the possibility to develop even more your very good ideas!
Anyway, we definitively want more about Lt.Commander McWhirter - and I'm sure that you'll do really good on bigger stuff as well!
Etok, rating: 96 January 14, 2002
Good job, you should definitly write more, It kept me in sespense scince I had to wait another 5 hours before I could finish it
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